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Jakuna:the story of a champion | Chapter 3 \ part 1 |

Posted by semeieseed - November 12th, 2008


Sorry for being so Lazy, I just had a hard time getting back on track. But as I said here is chapter 3's part 1. So in this part it will be a investigation on finding the murderer of Minsel.
Jakuna: story of a champion chaper 3 part 1
The next morning today was a day off from training, a Sunday. As a bright light gleamed through the dark room, he looked at the alarm clock across from his bed. The bright numbers slowly showed up as his blurry vision steadied it was 7:43 A.M. As he got up from his bed, he stared at the dark wooden boards below him he knew everybody was gonna be talking about the murder. He wasn't looking forward to talking about something as bleak as a murder that happened the same day he came to the Dojo.
As scrambled over to the showers he thought about how he lived before this living on the damp, cold streets in rags begging for money, so he could barely live. But now he lives in a room learning martial arts from some stranger he meet two days ago. After his shower, he put on his robe to go wonder around talking to people about the murder, and discovers more about it.
As he walks down the wooden hallways several students in blue robes pass by taking about a tournament that was going to happen soon. He went off to see his new friend Lemni, as he went down the hallway he saw Sermal talking to a strong student that had red hair, and big eyebrows. He decided to talk to Sermal, as he approached his teacher Sermal noticed Jakuna.
Jakuna said" So what happened to Minsel?" Sermal said back" He died...his service is tomorrow at 5 P.M."
Jakuna mumbled with a dreary facial expression" well that's bad news, I think I'll go get Breakfast now though ok, bye."
As Jakuna walked away to the doors, he saw Lemni in a white robe that is slightly wrinkled; he went to go to talk to him. Jakuna asked him if he wanted to catch Breakfast at the restraint down the street. He said no he was fine. But Jakuna noticed that he'd go outside in a robe in public, not a great fashion statement. So he ran to his room to change into his old cloths to go eat. As he went to the restraunt to go eat, he walked through the street he looked up at the blue sky, and the several clouds pass by it seems slightly peaceful besides the noisy cars, and people that rush by in a hurry.
So he arrived at the diner, he noticed a few other students were there (he noticed because they were wearing their robes...), so went to go sit with them. The person across from him was a Asian teenager that had brownish black hair he just noticed Jakuna went to go sit with them, the person next to him was a Indian teenager probably 19, has black hair he was wondering why Jakuna was sitting with them.
As he sat down the Asian teenager asked Jakuna" Why are you sitting with us, who are you", Jakuna replied" I'm a new student at the dojo, and I'm wondering about the murder."
The person next to him said" Hmm so your curious about that murder, no worries this kind of thing happens all the time", "But is it common when the best student in the dojo dies so easily!" Jakuna yelled.
The Asian teenager yelled "Don't talk so loud, I know this isn't the greatest situation that this happened the day you came here, so anyways we'll tell you the details about him, by the way my name is Yatsu", "ok, so why would this happen to him?"

This is the end of the first part, I hope you enjoyed it. Part 2 is coming out soon so keep your eyes open on my page. Part 2 is full of action, so if you were disempointed with the lack of action, you'll be happy in the next part :3. |!FIGHT ON!|
-Semeieseed


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