Hey fellow readers...what is basicly like like 2 people I was so excited about the first chapter, I'm planning on putting out chapter 2 tonight, or Thursday morning.
By that time I hope more people will be reading my stories(at least one person -_-), and It'll be coming ealier(I was expecting on putting out chapter 2 on Friday, or Saturday). Well I'll be working on it right now! and to all the people who were annoyed by the first chapters misspellings will be glad that I will be copying pasting this from microsoft meaning WORDCHECK*angel's choirs*
Well thanks for reading hope to see you enjoying chapter 2 soon
-semeieseed
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Not bad, kind of reminds me of the story from the video game Punch-Out. It's not bad, but then again it's chapter one, it makes for a nice set up right now, chapter two may start unfolding more within the process to a good story. You have built a nice structure to start on just don't crash it and you'll have a nice story.
semeieseed (Updated )
thanks keep an eye out in my posts the new ones wil be coming soon. Got any good ideas for the story I'll glady accept them and see if they'll fit the story.