Like I said I'll be writing the first chapter here on Newgrounds, I hope you enjoy the story.
Jakuna: the story of champion
This story follows the warrior Jakuna, as he fights his way to the top of fighting world, as a child his father Leon knew was going to become the champion so he decided to kill him. Even at such a young age he defeated his father, who is actually the current champion, and then from on he decided to finish of his father in mortal combat for championship.
When he owned his dad in battle, Jakuna ran out the door to somewhere else before his dad regained consciousness, or he knew he was done for. So when he ran out the door, he had a feeling that this was going it be the beginning of a long journey to the top. After that the whole world seemed to turn against him as he needed to find a place to live. He was lost in the middle of no where, he couldn't find a place, or person to turn to for a while. Until he fell asleep in an alley, when he woke up he saw a dark figure in front of him, the sun was beating down at him.
From what he saw he saw looked like a Southern American man who had short brown hair, he looked down at the boy in pity. The man greeted the young boy under grime newspapers with trash can surrounding him. The man greeted him, and asked why he was sleeping in an alleyway. Jakuna knew he seemed to be a martial artist teacher. After Jakuna got up he said replied that he ran away from home, and his father was an evil man.
The man asked if he wanted to become a student in his Brazilian Judo dojo, he agreed. They started walking towards the Dojo. Jakuna asked" So what exactly is Brazilian Judo?" the man replied" It's just like normal judo expect it's more likely to break your opponets bones". Jakuna showed a disturbed facial expression, and said"mmmmm......So by the way what is your name?" the man said his name was Sermal. After about thirty minutes of walking on the sidewalk from cars zooming by, they reached a building that was hiding the sun, and was at least 200 yards wide.
As they went toward the dark wooden doors, Jakuna felt nervous, he was going to begin his adventure with fighting. As he entered the building a blinding light came from the Northern window, but the light become bearable soon after, he saw Sermal talking what seemed to be a student at the Judo dojo as well. Sermal was showing the student a flip where he rolls the opponent over his back, and breaks the opponent's arm. As he watched he was amazed that how brutal the martial art was, after he watched the explanation he walked slightly up to Sermal, and asked what he should do. Sermal said " now that your here, you will receive some space to stay here until you have proved yourself worthy of joining the fighting league. He knew this was going to be a long ways, and thanked Sermal, and said "by the way my name is Jakuna".
After talking he wondered of into the dojo's halls, as he walked by he saw several able-bodied men walk by as he walks through a hall northwestern of the main training hall, he sees a blurred light as he walks towards it he looks out the window, looking at the cars, and trucks go down the streets in the city, and looks up at the pure white clouds passing by in the blue sky, it seemed slightly boring. As he walks back to talk to Sermal, he sees a fight in a room two men in white robes fighting atop a blue mat. As the man on the right his fist hoes to the man's head the other person grabs his fist twists it making him whines in pain, and flips him over snapping his arm in a way you don't want it to bend.
He looks in amazed, such a short battle can be won with this kind of Judo, and then he dashes off to see Sermal again.
that's the end of chapter one, I hope you enjoyed it I had fun writing it again :3 sooner or later more chapters will come out, so be sure to keep your eye on my page.
Update: I corrected a few misspellings tell me if there are anymore misspellings or mistakes

that's the end of chapter one, I hope you enjoyed it I had fun writing it again :3 sooner or later more chapters will come out, so be sure to keep your eye on my page.
Upodate:I corected a few misspellings tell me if there are anymore missplellings or mistakes
-Semeieseed