Here we go Chapter two is here after writing a story board(took me 45 minutes to set the story, and decide the detailed comments on the background), so yet again I'm proud to present my next chapter :3

Jakuna:the story of a champion |Chapter two learning the Brizilian Judo|
As Jakuna was running through the halls, he looked as the walls, and doors passed by he arrived at the main training hall. He saw dark blue mats across the floor, just looking at them you see many bloodstains stained from battles the students had. He knew it wasn't going to be easy learning this judo, but he didn't think about himself getting seriously hurt in training.
So from then seeing the bloodstains he went to go to talk to Sermal about the martial art, and wondered when he will start taking lessons. Sermal explains" Well new pupil we shall start teaching you the judo once you rest for the day, must be a long day from moving from the streets to, a dojo in a day...So go get some rest".
Jakuna questioned "But I do not know where my quarters is", Sermal answered thinkingly" well I think there is a room open to the hallway to the left, look for room 06".
Then Jakuna went off to see his room, to after walk a few feet he noticed people were staring at him questionably, obviously because he was wearing dirty cloths, and was all covered in grime from sleeping in the alleyways. Well once he found a door with the plaque 06 on it that is a grayish color. So he entered the room, he felt at home with the sight of a small bed, and a big window that shows the bustling town, and a slight light from the moon breaking through the curtains.
So he laid down on the bed, and quickly went to sleep. The next morning he woke up to yelp from down the hallway, it was at least 4:30 am. So it seems the yell spread through out the dojo waking all the students, the all rushed down to the central training hallway.
What they saw was a disturbing sight, a students body laid across the first blue mat from the entrance, Sermal walked slowly towards the body, and checked his pulse...whoever it was he was dead. After the whole situation started to simer down, and the ambulance came Jakuna wanted to know who died, so he went to go ask Sermal, he explained that it was his best student Minsel, his first suspect who did the crime was Minsel's rival Glem.
So then everybody got ready for their morning exercises, the morning seemed to be sad itself, after an hour it started to pour rain. Now that they done their morning exercises (consisted of a 2km run, and 45 pushups), they ate breakfast, and got ready for training.
|NOTE-to all the action lovers this is where the fighting starts|
As they learned a few new techniques, and also the rules, Jakuna was excited to start learning, but even so the whole thought of seeing a dead student, the second day he was there disturbed his thoughts. But any forth he was ready to start his lessons, and become the next great warrior.
His first opponent was also a new student to the dojo; they were ready to get the fighting. As soon as the battling started the other new student charged at Jakuna, but like he saw on the first day he was here, he grabbed his arm rolled him over his back, and threw him on the ground.
As the other new student was struggling Jakuna, he bent his arm in an unwanted way, and kept him in the mount position having him win the first round.
The next round the new student wrapped his arm in a bandage, and snapped his arm back in place. Then next round starts in a 30 seconds. So until then Jakuna decides to talk to his opponent his name is Lemni, and he's a teenager from Argentina that is looking for a martial art to study. So then the fight started again. This time both their fists where flying, Lemni dodged Jakuna's punch, by ducking then sweeped him(Sweep-When you knock your opponent down, and hold him down scoring you the round, or in regular Brazilian Judo scores you 2 points). So the battle was a tie.
From then on Lemni, and Jakuna, decided to be Rivals, and friends, after the battle the day was over he walked back to his dorm, it was a fulfilling day filled with a crime, a battle, and a new friend.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad a released this really early, and I hope you all enjoy this. And if you liked this story spread the news, I want as many people as posible to enjoy my lititure. Ok let's talk about Chapter 3, that is expected to come out on Sunday, or Monday. So like last time keep an eye out on my account, and I'll update you with idea's and mabey some special drawings of the Dojo layout if enough people come to read my story. Well I hope you all enjoy my story, and continue to support me with advice, and kudos to the-great-one for giving me good advice.
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