Here we go Chapter two is here after writing a story board(took me 45 minutes to set the story, and decide the detailed comments on the background), so yet again I'm proud to present my next chapter :3

Jakuna:the story of a champion |Chapter two learning the Brizilian Judo|
As Jakuna was running through the halls, he looked as the walls, and doors passed by he arrived at the main training hall. He saw dark blue mats across the floor, just looking at them you see many bloodstains stained from battles the students had. He knew it wasn't going to be easy learning this judo, but he didn't think about himself getting seriously hurt in training.
So from then seeing the bloodstains he went to go to talk to Sermal about the martial art, and wondered when he will start taking lessons. Sermal explains" Well new pupil we shall start teaching you the judo once you rest for the day, must be a long day from moving from the streets to, a dojo in a day...So go get some rest".
Jakuna questioned "But I do not know where my quarters is", Sermal answered thinkingly" well I think there is a room open to the hallway to the left, look for room 06".
Then Jakuna went off to see his room, to after walk a few feet he noticed people were staring at him questionably, obviously because he was wearing dirty cloths, and was all covered in grime from sleeping in the alleyways. Well once he found a door with the plaque 06 on it that is a grayish color. So he entered the room, he felt at home with the sight of a small bed, and a big window that shows the bustling town, and a slight light from the moon breaking through the curtains.
So he laid down on the bed, and quickly went to sleep. The next morning he woke up to yelp from down the hallway, it was at least 4:30 am. So it seems the yell spread through out the dojo waking all the students, the all rushed down to the central training hallway.
What they saw was a disturbing sight, a students body laid across the first blue mat from the entrance, Sermal walked slowly towards the body, and checked his pulse...whoever it was he was dead. After the whole situation started to simer down, and the ambulance came Jakuna wanted to know who died, so he went to go ask Sermal, he explained that it was his best student Minsel, his first suspect who did the crime was Minsel's rival Glem.
So then everybody got ready for their morning exercises, the morning seemed to be sad itself, after an hour it started to pour rain. Now that they done their morning exercises (consisted of a 2km run, and 45 pushups), they ate breakfast, and got ready for training.
|NOTE-to all the action lovers this is where the fighting starts|
As they learned a few new techniques, and also the rules, Jakuna was excited to start learning, but even so the whole thought of seeing a dead student, the second day he was there disturbed his thoughts. But any forth he was ready to start his lessons, and become the next great warrior.
His first opponent was also a new student to the dojo; they were ready to get the fighting. As soon as the battling started the other new student charged at Jakuna, but like he saw on the first day he was here, he grabbed his arm rolled him over his back, and threw him on the ground.
As the other new student was struggling Jakuna, he bent his arm in an unwanted way, and kept him in the mount position having him win the first round.
The next round the new student wrapped his arm in a bandage, and snapped his arm back in place. Then next round starts in a 30 seconds. So until then Jakuna decides to talk to his opponent his name is Lemni, and he's a teenager from Argentina that is looking for a martial art to study. So then the fight started again. This time both their fists where flying, Lemni dodged Jakuna's punch, by ducking then sweeped him(Sweep-When you knock your opponent down, and hold him down scoring you the round, or in regular Brazilian Judo scores you 2 points). So the battle was a tie.
From then on Lemni, and Jakuna, decided to be Rivals, and friends, after the battle the day was over he walked back to his dorm, it was a fulfilling day filled with a crime, a battle, and a new friend.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad a released this really early, and I hope you all enjoy this. And if you liked this story spread the news, I want as many people as posible to enjoy my lititure. Ok let's talk about Chapter 3, that is expected to come out on Sunday, or Monday. So like last time keep an eye out on my account, and I'll update you with idea's and mabey some special drawings of the Dojo layout if enough people come to read my story. Well I hope you all enjoy my story, and continue to support me with advice, and kudos to the-great-one for giving me good advice.
-semeieseed :3

Like I said I'll be writing the first chapter here on Newgrounds, I hope you enjoy the story.
Jakuna: the story of champion
This story follows the warrior Jakuna, as he fights his way to the top of fighting world, as a child his father Leon knew was going to become the champion so he decided to kill him. Even at such a young age he defeated his father, who is actually the current champion, and then from on he decided to finish of his father in mortal combat for championship.
When he owned his dad in battle, Jakuna ran out the door to somewhere else before his dad regained consciousness, or he knew he was done for. So when he ran out the door, he had a feeling that this was going it be the beginning of a long journey to the top. After that the whole world seemed to turn against him as he needed to find a place to live. He was lost in the middle of no where, he couldn't find a place, or person to turn to for a while. Until he fell asleep in an alley, when he woke up he saw a dark figure in front of him, the sun was beating down at him.
From what he saw he saw looked like a Southern American man who had short brown hair, he looked down at the boy in pity. The man greeted the young boy under grime newspapers with trash can surrounding him. The man greeted him, and asked why he was sleeping in an alleyway. Jakuna knew he seemed to be a martial artist teacher. After Jakuna got up he said replied that he ran away from home, and his father was an evil man.
The man asked if he wanted to become a student in his Brazilian Judo dojo, he agreed. They started walking towards the Dojo. Jakuna asked" So what exactly is Brazilian Judo?" the man replied" It's just like normal judo expect it's more likely to break your opponets bones". Jakuna showed a disturbed facial expression, and said"mmmmm......So by the way what is your name?" the man said his name was Sermal. After about thirty minutes of walking on the sidewalk from cars zooming by, they reached a building that was hiding the sun, and was at least 200 yards wide.
As they went toward the dark wooden doors, Jakuna felt nervous, he was going to begin his adventure with fighting. As he entered the building a blinding light came from the Northern window, but the light become bearable soon after, he saw Sermal talking what seemed to be a student at the Judo dojo as well. Sermal was showing the student a flip where he rolls the opponent over his back, and breaks the opponent's arm. As he watched he was amazed that how brutal the martial art was, after he watched the explanation he walked slightly up to Sermal, and asked what he should do. Sermal said " now that your here, you will receive some space to stay here until you have proved yourself worthy of joining the fighting league. He knew this was going to be a long ways, and thanked Sermal, and said "by the way my name is Jakuna".
After talking he wondered of into the dojo's halls, as he walked by he saw several able-bodied men walk by as he walks through a hall northwestern of the main training hall, he sees a blurred light as he walks towards it he looks out the window, looking at the cars, and trucks go down the streets in the city, and looks up at the pure white clouds passing by in the blue sky, it seemed slightly boring. As he walks back to talk to Sermal, he sees a fight in a room two men in white robes fighting atop a blue mat. As the man on the right his fist hoes to the man's head the other person grabs his fist twists it making him whines in pain, and flips him over snapping his arm in a way you don't want it to bend.
He looks in amazed, such a short battle can be won with this kind of Judo, and then he dashes off to see Sermal again.
that's the end of chapter one, I hope you enjoyed it I had fun writing it again :3 sooner or later more chapters will come out, so be sure to keep your eye on my page.
Update: I corrected a few misspellings tell me if there are anymore misspellings or mistakes

that's the end of chapter one, I hope you enjoyed it I had fun writing it again :3 sooner or later more chapters will come out, so be sure to keep your eye on my page.
Upodate:I corected a few misspellings tell me if there are anymore missplellings or mistakes
-Semeieseed

I'll be rewriting a story I've made in the 2nd grade but revise it, I know what your all thinking 2nd grade gawd this is gonna be a crappy story. Not really, but anyways I'll fix it to everbodies standerds. So right now I'll post the first chapter within an hour some be sure to check up evernow, and then.

A few things have gone to witht the progress of idea of "New World", you will start off in Newfoundland
(around Canada). And the history of the discovery of Amercia will be switched around a lot, first of all monsters such as Batmen to Zombies are in controll with most of America with the tribes of Indians.
And you'll need to cross America with the History of America passing by to the Colinols coming to America within less of 30 years within the games history. The main charecters name is Avidema, a Viking from Europe. Along with this is a picture of a playable charecter Astrek, he was an Aztec captured by the Vikings that were venturing to Mexico.
-End of post-
Update I couldn't post the picture due to dificulties will be resolved soon.

The adventure's of the Grim weaper, and Mr.Wiggles didn't go down well, so now a new project has statrted about Vikings in the begining of America with a big twist too history. More details will be out later so if you've read this keep an eye on my posts if your interested in helping in the progress of the game you can pm me.